how to end a up-coming movie i'm doing..
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how to end a up-coming movie i'm doing..
i am making a movie..here is the storyboard..
a guy goes out to the bush, just before he does on a news bulletin it says about how the serial killer has escaped from jail. he is wearing all black. so the guy is out in the bush and he thinks is being followed, all of a sudded he is being chased down the bush. in the next scene you see him getting stabbed, then in the next part he is being buried..(this is all happening in the afternoon), then there is a night shot of the killer and the grave of the guy that he killed..
I just needed some guidence on what the f... to do!
if anyone could help that'd be great
thanks,
jared
a guy goes out to the bush, just before he does on a news bulletin it says about how the serial killer has escaped from jail. he is wearing all black. so the guy is out in the bush and he thinks is being followed, all of a sudded he is being chased down the bush. in the next scene you see him getting stabbed, then in the next part he is being buried..(this is all happening in the afternoon), then there is a night shot of the killer and the grave of the guy that he killed..
I just needed some guidence on what the f... to do!
if anyone could help that'd be great
thanks,
jared
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We can't comment properly until you're a little more specific about the movie. Putting your outline in the film's chronological order isn't a bad idea either (the part about the news bulletin almost seemed like an afterthought).
If you want to make the movie, go ahead. What follows is my opinion and my opinion only.
"Horror" films are wwaaayyy overdone, especially in the low-budget community. I, personally, think most of the so-called horror movies are retarded beyond all reason. So I'm a bit biased against them from the start. However, and remember this is just my opinion, you can make this movie more innovative if you prolong the chase between the victim and the killer, adding a legitimate thriller aspect to the movie. Making the main character be killed (if the victim is the main character, not the killer--that's not at all clear from your outline) isn't a bad idea, but it can lead to the audience thinking "So what was that all about, again?" if you don't do it right. You'll have to develop the character enough for us to feel sad when he dies; otherwise, I for one am just going to raise an eyebrow and say the movie was a waste of time.
Probably enough feedback from me for now. Sorry if I seem overly negative.
If you want to make the movie, go ahead. What follows is my opinion and my opinion only.
"Horror" films are wwaaayyy overdone, especially in the low-budget community. I, personally, think most of the so-called horror movies are retarded beyond all reason. So I'm a bit biased against them from the start. However, and remember this is just my opinion, you can make this movie more innovative if you prolong the chase between the victim and the killer, adding a legitimate thriller aspect to the movie. Making the main character be killed (if the victim is the main character, not the killer--that's not at all clear from your outline) isn't a bad idea, but it can lead to the audience thinking "So what was that all about, again?" if you don't do it right. You'll have to develop the character enough for us to feel sad when he dies; otherwise, I for one am just going to raise an eyebrow and say the movie was a waste of time.
Probably enough feedback from me for now. Sorry if I seem overly negative.
People shouldn't be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.
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