party video

[iCEbLuEORbitZ]

this is the party scene intro to the failed movie i was going to make called "freil". i will maybe pick up on it over the summer again, but it was too big of a project with not enough help to make it. heres the party scene tho. enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zsbJPlBCOJ8

[iCEbLuEORbitZ]

will someone please comment?

[windog]

no.

[Zacatac927]

pretty good.... i don't know if you meant it but it was pretty long and i kinda was waiting for it to end..... from watching that i go: party whooo! and then guy sees girl alone , guy goes over to girl and she is gone so he steps into dark room.... yah i liked the shots the slowmo was good and the strobing and all the effects were good.... nice

[windog]

filming quite good.

[iCEbLuEORbitZ]

well, it was originally supposed to be credits and such, and then that led into the first scene where he meets her. so thats why its kinda long.

[Ornsack]

It looks really glossy!

Really slow paced for what it is though. I'm sure you just wanted to use all your lovely footage and use the whole song, but it's far too long with nothing happening!

Cut down and it'd be really nice though.

[iCEbLuEORbitZ]

what exactly do you mean by glossy? thanks for the replies.

[Ornsack]

Well I thought you'd stolen your first shot from an actual film. Looks really nice! But yeah, got bored after a few mins, but that's nothing a quick re-edit couldn't have handled.

[iCEbLuEORbitZ]

wat do you think about the way i put together the leadup to him following her out the door? also, i have learned much since this shooting, and we deffinately need more lighting next time. and more ppl. we only had like 14 ppl there.

[Magic-Man]

I loved the zoom and trail effects, they were pretty nicely done. Yes like people have mentioned, it does need trimming. It must've been pretty awkward to film your mates dance in a room...

[iCEbLuEORbitZ]

haha yea. it was more of a pain in the A**. we spent 9 hours completely removing everything in my friends basement, setting up and getting everything ready, then only 14 ppl showed up, and it was hard to get anyone to move, so i'm surprised we even got what we did.