New short....really short

This forum is for announcing and discussing your films.

Moderator: Moderator Team

Post Reply
justin!butcher
Senior Member
Senior Member
Posts: 193
Joined: Wed Nov 17, 2004 4:07 pm
Location: masfield oh.

New short....really short

Post by justin!butcher »

Ok, me and my little brothers where bored so we spent about ten minutes making this. please dear God dont judge me on this tho. IT honestly was about a half an hour in the making

http://www.realworldservers.com/movies/evan/evan.mov

If the server is really slow its my fault. Its new and we're experimenting
justin!butcher
Senior Member
Senior Member
Posts: 193
Joined: Wed Nov 17, 2004 4:07 pm
Location: masfield oh.

RE: New short....really short

Post by justin!butcher »

...No comments....
Ornsack
Moderator
Moderator
Posts: 1520
Joined: Sat Jun 01, 2002 11:43 pm
Location: Bristol, England
Contact:

RE: New short....really short

Post by Ornsack »

I tried downloading it last night but it took too damn long and I got impatient :(
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=loFABl-1Zcw]THE SALESMAN - YouTube[/url]
User avatar
naflish
Member
Member
Posts: 62
Joined: Sun Jun 26, 2005 5:00 am

RE: New short....really short

Post by naflish »

put it on www.savefile.com please
}}}{{{{
User avatar
ctbullet
Forum Addict
Forum Addict
Posts: 638
Joined: Fri Dec 23, 2005 5:05 pm
Location: ENGLAND
Contact:

RE: New short....really short

Post by ctbullet »

took no time at all to load....

don't understand why you've posted this on a fourm and have asked for no critical comment

screw that

i couldn't tell whether your actor where hobits or people, they were like 3 ft tall

and one 'elite' guy looked like he was wearing a hawaiin grass skirt

but other than that it was well filmed
Our Combat Years: In production
[img]http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a69/ct_bullet/wolfvisionpbanner2.jpg[/img]
http://wolfvisionp.tripod.com
justin!butcher
Senior Member
Senior Member
Posts: 193
Joined: Wed Nov 17, 2004 4:07 pm
Location: masfield oh.

RE: New short....really short

Post by justin!butcher »

The server changed the format last night so it loads fast. The hobits wehre the only people available to act...they are acutall people... And If you saw something wron with it please comment, but keep in mind it was all put together in about a half an hour
ipon70
Posting Freak
Posting Freak
Posts: 337
Joined: Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:29 am
Location: Southern, Oregon
Contact:

RE: New short....really short

Post by ipon70 »

E for Effort, seemed to just start and end........more like it was the middle of something else.
ipon70
www.nova-productions.com
www.lakesideentertainment.com

Latest Game [url=http://www.nova-productions.com/whack_a_bean.html]Whack-A-Bean[/url]
User avatar
DEDFX
Forum Veteran
Forum Veteran
Posts: 1228
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 5:59 pm
Location: eastern MA
Contact:

Post by DEDFX »

Try not to ever zoom, too many cuts for a camera shot in the forrest, take orange off the guns, you didn't need the music at the end, just the walking part was fine.

!USE A TRIPOD AND STEADYCAM!
blue_dirt
Member
Member
Posts: 76
Joined: Fri Dec 19, 2003 9:56 am
Location: Santa Rosa, CA, USA
Contact:

Post by blue_dirt »

More coverage. I wanted to see feet running in the snow, close ups of their faces, breath in the cold air, close ups of the weapons, etc. If you had more coverage you could have had faster cuts to go with the music. The story was clear and your angles and shots were good.
Truggy
Forum Addict
Forum Addict
Posts: 886
Joined: Tue Sep 02, 2003 12:49 pm
Location: GR Michigan
Contact:

Post by Truggy »

Ok.

After watching this im thinking to myself "why am i watching this?!"....C on the effort, because you tried, it's all trial and error with this things. I must agree you need to severly work on this. Second, i hate it, just HATE it when people use music from say "the matrix" and stuff like that. Find something origional. Second, When you are using guns, get electrial tape and put it on the ends of em, That way when i look i'll potentially see its real. TRIPOD TRIPOD TRIPOD....Cannot stress this enough. I dont think anyone can. If you would of got more creative angles, and put more of a story to it, it would of made more sense. All i saw from this was a few people, walking through woods with guns, shooting at some other guy...that to me is the boner killer right there. Am i suppost to suspend disbelief and think "hrm, maybe there is a story, but i just cant see it"...I shouldnt have to do that. Make a story, and try again.. Take this as me trying to help ya, not as me being an uptight pri_ck...I know i sound like one, but hey, u only get better if you try.

-Nick M <truggy>
[url=http://profile.xfire.com/xerojohny88][img]http://miniprofile.xfire.com/bg/bg/type/0/xerojohny88.png[/img][/url]
--
Dance Dance Revolution: Proving white people dont have rhythm since 1998
maj_barnes
Forum Veteran
Forum Veteran
Posts: 1545
Joined: Sun Jan 30, 2005 2:09 am
Location: Orlando, FL

Post by maj_barnes »

Closer angles on actors, add muzzle flashes or pretend to have recoil, add more rather than just end with shooting.
Post Reply