Two commercials I made for my high school (online).

[tallman_house_pictures]

Hey,
These are two commercials I made for my high school.
The assignment was to make two of a combining 1.5 minute length...

Tell me what you think of 'em

#1 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k4BH23oTFGI
#2- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qvxNOpDkSKE
Thanks,

[Gyro]

What the Band of Brothers music?

[ctbullet]

#1- why are two guys holding hands?
#2- the music doesn't really suit

but otherwise good stuff

[tallman_house_pictures]

Lol. #1 is supposed to be more of a parody...(hence the two guys holding hands)
The BOB music was all I could find....always seems to fit everything.

Thanks.

[freed]

You did a gay parody for your high school advertisment.

Dang, I bet that F hurt.

If you going to parody highscool, I would think a parody or play on the typical stereotypes that are about (E.g. jocks, Geeks Pretty girls) would have been great for you. Just an Idea, but you went with the male on male action, so whatever you feel is best.

On a much more positive note, the second one was much better, although it didn't really say anything about the high school, it was just random shots of the place, nothing that really advertised it well. Maybe more in class shots or groups of students doing typical high school stuff, stuff like that would have made it much more funner and more revealing.

Overall, not a bad job, just not a good one either.

[tallman_house_pictures]

Freed,
The point that you're missing is that its an all guys school....(I bet you get the joke now). The two guys are also the class clowns...

[Gyro]

Dang, I bet that F hurt.

Caught in the act! That is NOT constructive criticism!

[freed]

You're right Gyro, I call this one, Sarcasm.

Tallman, I understand now, good jab at your scool I guess, good work.