Hey,
These are two commercials I made for my high school.
The assignment was to make two of a combining 1.5 minute length...
Tell me what you think of 'em
#1 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k4BH23oTFGI
#2- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qvxNOpDkSKE
Thanks,
Two commercials I made for my high school (online).
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RE: Two commercials I made for my high school (online).
What the Band of Brothers music?
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#1- why are two guys holding hands?
#2- the music doesn't really suit
but otherwise good stuff
#2- the music doesn't really suit
but otherwise good stuff
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RE: Two commercials I made for my high school (online).
Lol. #1 is supposed to be more of a parody...(hence the two guys holding hands)
The BOB music was all I could find....always seems to fit everything.
Thanks.
The BOB music was all I could find....always seems to fit everything.
Thanks.
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RE: Two commercials I made for my high school (online).
You did a gay parody for your high school advertisment.
Dang, I bet that F hurt.
If you going to parody highscool, I would think a parody or play on the typical stereotypes that are about (E.g. jocks, Geeks Pretty girls) would have been great for you. Just an Idea, but you went with the male on male action, so whatever you feel is best.
On a much more positive note, the second one was much better, although it didn't really say anything about the high school, it was just random shots of the place, nothing that really advertised it well. Maybe more in class shots or groups of students doing typical high school stuff, stuff like that would have made it much more funner and more revealing.
Overall, not a bad job, just not a good one either.
Dang, I bet that F hurt.
If you going to parody highscool, I would think a parody or play on the typical stereotypes that are about (E.g. jocks, Geeks Pretty girls) would have been great for you. Just an Idea, but you went with the male on male action, so whatever you feel is best.
On a much more positive note, the second one was much better, although it didn't really say anything about the high school, it was just random shots of the place, nothing that really advertised it well. Maybe more in class shots or groups of students doing typical high school stuff, stuff like that would have made it much more funner and more revealing.
Overall, not a bad job, just not a good one either.
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RE: Two commercials I made for my high school (online).
Freed,
The point that you're missing is that its an all guys school....(I bet you get the joke now). The two guys are also the class clowns...
The point that you're missing is that its an all guys school....(I bet you get the joke now). The two guys are also the class clowns...
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Caught in the act! That is NOT constructive criticism!freed wrote: Dang, I bet that F hurt.
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You're right Gyro, I call this one, Sarcasm.
Tallman, I understand now, good jab at your scool I guess, good work.
Tallman, I understand now, good jab at your scool I guess, good work.
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