THE REFUSE COLLECTOR - New comdey short

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THE REFUSE COLLECTOR - New comdey short

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Hey guys, I got something new for y'all.

In the few spare hours we've had over the last week my crew and I have managed to begin this little comedy short.

It's about a bin man investigating the mystery surrounding an unpleasant discovery he makes during his weekly round...

Check it out on YouTube here - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DSbz5SgES-4 - and let me know what you think :).

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ugh, accidentlly deleted long comment lol, well ill retype it later!
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Nice one, Matt! Gues who I am, he he he he heee....
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Post by Kentertainment »

Quite enjoyable. You've always had great cinematography and editing that flows very well. Your music transition was also good. Hey what ever happened to the film you were working on where the guy sees his unborn brother?
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Post by NGFilms03 »

We got bored :P
As is the norm...
This one will be done by the end of the month though, it's hardly an epic, lol.
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Where did you get the truck from?? Does your dad or someone work as a rubbish collector?? Anyway I wasn't enthralled, I actually, to tell you the truth, don't no why, I should have been. As people have said, brilliant editing and music transitions etc. All works well but I didn't find any of it funny or interesting. Will watch the whole thing when it ocmes out though.
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Post by ctbullet »

other than the voice i didn't see what was funny

well edited though
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Jperson, isn't that kind of offensive, asking does your dad work with rubbish or what not? :lol:
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I don't discriminate against people who have dads who work collecting (keyword) rubbish, or for that matter anyone who does that for a job themselves. But I thought the other geezer at the beggining looked maybe like the guys dad...
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I don't even know how he did the thing with the garbage truck either, and he's my brother!
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Brother? Unluc... um, good for you!
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Bad for me :cry:
He's a pain in the a** and won't let me use his camera, so I have to use my friends. At least I'm saving up for my own :D
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What sort of money are we talking? £600? Less or more?
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Post by MadCowFilms »

Well, his one cost about £400, but Josh, one of NGFilms' friends and the guy with red hair who descovers the arm and the leg in the bin, is selling his because hes getting a new one and I hope to buy it off him for £50.
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Back on topic, guys?
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Okay. The angles you used were very good. Only thing is, not really a critisim, if you know what I mean, is that usually Refuse Collectors only get the bins which have been put out. So, why would the Refuse Collector go on to someones property and get ther bin from there?
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Post by Jperson »

Ooooooooooh! That is a good point from mad Cow, yeah they only usually get bins off properties - maybe you should change it so he gets them from a side alley or something.
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Then the recycling bag breaks and he tries to put it in the bin and so forth :D
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Yes, very good MadCow. :)
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Do I get a gold star :D ?
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Yes you can have a little, glittery, gold sticker.
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Post by Randall »

I can already begin to see who the annoying brother out the two is.
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Post by lethelgirth87 »

Seems more like a comedy/drama to me...
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