Rainbow six script

[ALove]

here it is (so far)

FADE IN:
INT. THE BANK
Security guard 1 enters with Krispy Creme box.
Security Guard turns around and puts keys on hook
GUARD 1
Hey, so I hear it’s you’re last day. Congragulations!
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EXT. THE BANK
White unmarked van pulls up to door
CUT TO:
GUARD 2
Yeah, they’re movin’ me to Gilliam Street.

GUARD 1
Oh… well here’s some donuts. To celebrate.
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EXT. THE BANK
Thug parks car and walks to back van doors.
Doors open and reveal a terrorist group
One terrorist locks in AK-47 magazine
All hop out
One terrorist puts his AK Bestanez in his coat
All other terrorists do the same
CUT TO:
INT. BANK
GUARD 1
Not much goin’ on today. Just a couple of skateboarders doing their tricks of the front stairs.
GUARD 2
Yeah, looks like im gonna have a quiet last day.
CUT TO:
EXT. BANK
Skaters look at the terrorists and slowly walk away.
Cameraman follows terrorists to the building.
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INT. BANK
Terrorists enter.
GUARD 2
Can I help you?
TERRORIST
Yes.
Terrorist unloads a clip on guard 1.
TERRORIST
OK! No one move!
All inside bank just fall down screaming.
Terrorist ties people’s hands together and line up people on railing.
Man sneaks away.
TERRORIST
(in Arabic) that’s how many now?
Man sneaking towards fire alarm
TERRORIST 2
(in Arabic) twenty-seven.
Man almost there
TERRORIST
Twenty-seven. Wait there’s one there
TERRORIST
(to man) you, you there! You cannot hide from me!
Man quickly pulls fire alarm.
Terrorist fires glock and time slows down so we can see bullet and follows right to mans forehead.
TERRORIST
s***! Alright listen up! You all are hostages because of this mans actions. We will kill one of you each ½ hour until Hazim Uurhias is released from prison.
Woman cries in terror and hides 7 year old child.
TERRORIST
You!
Terrorist points at woman
TERRORIST
Come here.
Woman is scared and stands up child behind her back
CHILD
Mommy! Im scared
TERRORIST
If your son will comply with everything I say, I am willing to let your child live. He will walk out the front door and inform the Fire department that we have Hostages!
WOMAN
(Cries in relief) Jason do you understand what you have to do?
CHILD
Yes...
Woman cries and gives boy hug.
Boy goes outside.
Sound of sirens fade in
We see firetruck come
Child just standing there and crying.
Fireman jumps off with axe
FIREMAN
Son... what is it
Sound is inaudible but reaction tells us that fireman knows
FIREMAN
Don’t go in there!
FIREMAN 2
What is it
FIREMAN
Theres no fire. Call the cops.
CUT TO:
INT. MI6 HQ
Phone rings and guy picks up
COLONEL THOMPSON
Colonel Thompson... what? Where? Alright. Im on it.
Colonel Thompson hangs up phone.
COLONEL THOMPSON
Get Captain Price ready, we’re calling in team rainbow.
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INT. RAINBOW BARRAKS
Guy zips up coat
Guy puts on hat
Girl puts on vest
Weapons on rack
People in swat like uniforms pick them up

[foxwood]

not to be carping, but maybe you should have waited until you had more of the script before you posted anything. Because it's quite hard to coment on somthing that is well like only a page in a half of script.

[crazy8]

I think that when its finished it will be good. did the terrorists plan to take hostages to free the guy from prison or was that just a split second decision. if you think up some characters of your own, you could make a movie that will not be breaching copyright laws.

[ALove]

the characters are'nt the same as the book/game(s) and i only wanted to know if i was headed in the right direction

[foxwood]

well you have a hostage situation in a bank, sounds like you read the third chapter, and the charaters that you mentioned sounded the same, unless my mimory is hazy, its been a while since I read Ranbow Six.

[SgtPadrino]

Well, you won't need to write a script for it; filming for the Hollywood film Rainbow Six has already begun, as far as I know.

[foxwood]

well in that case change the names and you have somthing hollywood will buy if R6 does well.

[aranwizard]

i thought it was ok, if not a little unoriginal, what you should do is make it your own, by using your own character names, situations etc. terrorists in a bank demanding the release of a prisoner, its been done

[SgtPadrino]

i thought it was ok, if not a little unoriginal, what you should do is make it your own, by using your own character names, situations etc. terrorists in a bank demanding the release of a prisoner, its been done

Um yeah, Rainbow Six did it before. Look at the title.[/quote]