Powder script on web
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Powder script on web
Hey dudes, I've just put up a temporary site (until I get my .com one working) where you can find out about my film company, OddOneOut, and our upcoming movies Powder and Bingo, our debut Bobby Go Long Long, and read the first 20 mins of the Powder script. So, if you have a couple a' minutes to spar, swing over and read my script, then give me some feedback. It's at http://www.freewebs.com/xploziv/ Thanx.
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RE: Powder script on web
Soz, I'm an idiot. I've added a link now.
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RE: Powder script on web
Okay, I've just uploaded the first scene of the movie. Here's the thread for feedback: http://www.matthawkins.co.uk/forum/viewtopic.php?t=6787
Here's the link for the clip http://www.matt.echowave.net/uploads/NoRemorse/
Here's the link for the clip http://www.matt.echowave.net/uploads/NoRemorse/
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RE: Powder script on web
You seem to use the same rico sound for everything, and also, when the boy gets shot in the head, it looks like the other guy is shooting over his head, also the sound is off. Try using some better sounds and a better muzzle flash; and you might want to think about showing blood shooting out of the front of his head once the gun is fired.
Here's a good one thanks to Epsilon:
http://matt.echowave.net/blood.zip
Here's a good one thanks to Epsilon:
http://matt.echowave.net/blood.zip