Hellions - my short screenplay

[Passman]

I've written a 19 page screenplay called Hellions. Here's the synpopsis:

Two hellions, Ryu and Tak, likes to play sick and deviant games. They kidnap their “preyâ€

[DarkElastic]

It is good. I liked it. Just a few points:

If a car is travelling at 100km/h it would not stop suddenly.

Did Tax shoot Yun through the seat as he was lying on the back seats, or from the side?

It will be a nice project with some good camera work. Just the blood and guts effects that might cause some trouble to get right. Nice idea though, and I like the ending.

[Passman]

Thanks for taking the time to read the script. I know it sounds unrealistic about the car stopping suddenly. Couldn't think of anything to make the ending exciting so i had to put the car stopping right in front of him. Maybe i should write that the car would drive slower? It is after all a bumpy country road.

We don't see Tak shooting Yun so i think that it is not that important how he shoots him. Maybe there is a big hole in the passenger seat, but we don't need to see it.

Thanks for the comment and glad that you liked it.
If everything goes well with budget and all, i will have the movie in production late May or early June.

[Freddie]

Man.. I really love this script!
Do you have AIM or MSN?
Really important.. gotta talk to you
My:
MSN: FreZko@systrickz.com
AIM: Tricking FreZko

[Spike_P_2]

sounds too familiar to a few movies ive seen lately

[crb]

19 pages, the shortest I have ever written was 60 pages but that was the first draft, then it ended up being revised and ended up into 110 pages. i don't think I could write just 19 pages.