Jordan And I Fight, IT DONT SUCK SO MUCH

[rhys]

Hi,
I made this movie with my cousin cos i got bored, and yeah, it turned out bad, then i re-edited it, added a special effect and some sound effects.
Seriously its not 100%, but to fix that i would have to film some more angles, but hes in another state at the moment.
Heres the gist (taken from the youtube thing cos i cant be bothered makin a new one):
Jordan and I got bored so we made a movie. He tries to kill me, so i kill him. I re-edited it because when i rewatched it, i hated it. The whole electricity thing was like a medefor of my anger, but im not sure.
P.S. sorry that u cant see the knife in any of the shots.
Here is the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79m2X3u6QMM

[ALove]

Actually, im surprised, that wasnt too bad. A little bit slow paced, and could do with a couple more cuts methinks.

[Jimbobsquarepants]

quite good some nice effects but you sould have some faster music and cuts. Why dont you make a film with a story though?

[rhys]

I will be, i will be. Soon, very soon.

[Djokicko]

OK still just a little better I liked the effect at the end but again still slow paced, and try some different angle’s don’t just put the tripod somewhere and shoot ,be creative put the camera on the floor or something just be creative with the camera.

[Zac]

that was okay, the part wen you fall on the ground was...cr** and really slow. but i liked the lightning eyes inverted colour thingy (yeh shut-up its a technical term)

[ctbullet]

i can see by watching your shorts that you are infact improving,

as for the actually acting side of things, you seem to have been standing around a little, waiting for something to happen, maybe speed up some cuts

i loved the special effects, was an original idea

[rhys]

i can see by watching your shorts that you are infact improving,

HEHE!!! Can i get a Mintie now? It would have been so much better if jordan didnt get bored of it so quickly, and could actually act, and didnt p*** me off with the whole 'laundry detergand to the face' saga.... idiot.
Im annoyed because i have to do another 7 weeks of karate before i can get my blue belt, but thats ok... hehe, i was so excited the other day because i was doin knife hand strikes, and i got bruises!!! (which means that i was doing it right, and my hands will heal and become stronger). BUT THEY DONT HURT AT ALL!!, but they look cool. When i bruise them again, ill film it so i can chuck it in my movie some where, real scars, WOOT.

[DarkElastic]

I do worry about your mental state Rhys!!!

Are you safe enough to be out in the streets of Victoria, Australia?

[rhys]

Oh yes, but if someone p*** me off, there not just gonna leave bleeding... If they leave at all, hehe! I like knives and swords.