Bad Dream (horror short)

[elusivepictures]

another quick horror short - written, shot & edited in just over a day.

http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid ... e+pictures

Genre: Horror/Monster
Length: 2m30s
Budget: £1 (Bottle of ketchup & pack of turkey slices!)

Feedback/comments very welcome...

Cheers

[Theshapecool]

Not bad, But I think the ketchup and turkey looked very bad, and the ghoul/nosferatu type thing was poorly acted, It needed more make up, he just looked like a guy with long nails impersonating an autistic child.
the setting was great and the barbed wire looked good, the music was also good.
the shoe idea was nice but the camera shouldnt have moved to look at the shoes, the shot was fine and
you could see it enough without dwelling on it.
It needed titles aswell, but apart from that, it wasent bad.
there was too much swearing for no reason and that got annoying.
next time get someone else to play the baddie and give him more make up and diffrent trousers,
and use some fake skin and fake blood, it looked like he was eating tomato sauce and turky off the guys
stomach! but yeah, Id like to see more. I'm from hampshire too and did a movie called 'bad dreams'
keep them coming!